Question

假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。

写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。

注意：

1.短文词数不少于100；

2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

I am an 18-year-old middle school student, _________________________________________

Answer 1

题型分析

本篇作文是属于提纲式作文，要求学生用英语写一篇日记。内容为周末帮助家人做家务，这是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性的原则。提纲类书面表达要求学生在写作时条理清晰，将所给的几个要点适当展开，并合理的组成比较通顺的语句。写作中要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，首先要保证句子的正确，然后尽量使用一点高级词汇，适当的时候变换句式结构，使得条理清晰，行文优美。

审题要素

写作时应注意下面几点：

（1）注意人称，日记应该用第一人称来写。

（2）注意时态的正确使用：试卷要求记述周末的一次经历，所以应该用过去时。

（3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。

思路导引

首先，说明做家务的理由。

其次，交代做家务的过程。

最后，谈谈你的感受。

以上各提纲自然成段，条理清晰。

标准范文

Possible Version:

I’m an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.

Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorouhg cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapera and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.

At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired I was, I never felt so happy.

赏析：

重点短语	be busy with… 忙于。。。 put them in place把。。。放在固定地方wiped … off 檫去。。。
高级句型	Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help. （因为）感到非常抱歉，我开始想着怎么做来帮（父母）。 Tired I was, I never felt so happy. 尽管我很累，但我从没有（像这样）开心过。