Question

目前，学校存在少数考生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是 “My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：

主要原因	考试偏多、偏难
不用功、懒惰
取悦父母、老师
个人看法	作弊不对，违反校规
要诚实，努力学习
……（其他看法）

注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。2．词数：120-150；开头已给出.

3．参考词汇：作弊 cheat（v. ）

 

Answer 1

【答案】

My opinion on cheating in examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take emanations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better result to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the school rules. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】

试题分析：：本文属于提纲类作文，文章的要点都以表格的形式给了出来，要表达全面清楚。要注意谋篇布局，文章使用一般现在时为主，在翻译要点的时候，不要一定按照它的顺序，可以灵活表达。在选择词汇时要选择一些高级的词汇，；在句型的选择方面也要注意使用多样性的句式，丰富文章的表达。

考点：考查提纲类作文

点评：提纲类作文的关键在于要点不能遗漏和省略，表达一定要全面，覆盖要覆盖的所有内容。要运用多样化的句型如倒装句，强调句，省略句等让文章更有层次，更有文采。