Question

1．假如你是李华．你的美国朋友John来信说，将来你所在的城市任教，请你帮他找一处合适的房子．请根据下面的提示和图画给他回一封信，介绍你所找的这套房子的情况，并征求他的意见．（1）房屋所在的位置和周边环境；（2）房屋的结构；（3）房内设施；（4）房租价格．

注意：1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
Dear John，
     I'm very glad to hear that you will come to work in our city．
                                                                                    Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 人称和时态：
本文是一篇应用文--电子邮件，应该以第一人称口吻回复电子邮件；在介绍房子的信息时以一般现在时为主．
内容要点：
（1）房屋所在的位置和周边环境；
 （2）房屋的结构；
 （3）房内设施；
（4）房租价格．
（5）征求John的意见．
重要短语及句型：
on the fifth floor：在五楼
in the center of：在…中心
What's more：此外，而且
be equipped with：装备有
the living facilities：生活设施
no more than：仅仅
a real bargain：挺划算的买卖
There is a supermarket，a hospital and a bus stop，making it convenient for you to live here．那里有一家超市、一家医院和一个公共汽车站台，这使得你在这里生活非常方便．
The rent is 1000yuan per month，which is a real bargain．房租每个月100元，是很划算的买卖．

解答 I'm very glad to hear that you will come to work in our city．You said you wanted to rent a house，and I've found one．
    The house is on the fifth floor of a six-story building in the center of our city．Around it，there is a supermarket，a hospital and a bus stop，making it convenient for you to live here（房屋所在的位置和周边环境）．What's more，the house contains a living room，two bedrooms，one kitchen and one toilet（房屋的结构）．Besides，it is equipped with all the living facilities such as natural gas，furniture，air-conditioners and so on（房内设施）．Moreover，the rent is no more than 1000yuan per month，which is a real bargain（房租价格）．
    If you are not satisfied with the house，I'll try to find another for you（征求John的意见）．Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点，根据题目的要求审要点，要点要包括文字中的要点，也要包括图片或表格中的主要信息．其次要考虑词语和句型的选用，词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．