Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇短文向校刊“英语园地”投稿，记述你班上周组织“国旗在我心中”系列活动的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, my classmates and I participated in a series of activities with the theme “National Flag in my Heart”.

During the class meeting on Monday, our class teacher informed us of these activities which were aimed to enhance our understanding of the national flag and promote patriotism. Fully aware of its significance, we couldn’t wait to get started.

Over the next several days, we learned more about the topic from various resources. We went through books on the birth of the flag, which took us back to 7 decades ago, the dawn of a new era. We also collected online stories of the flag in more recent years and realized what it symbolizes for every Chinese, including soldiers on guard at the borderline, the athletes on Olympics podiums and so on.

Watching the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square impressed us most. We stood in solemn silence as the soldiers marched to the pole, guarding the national flag. As the flag went up, we saluted while singing our national anthem together. Before we knew it, our eyes had welled up with tears, for we were filled with pride thinking of the prosperity of today and feeling admiration toward all who made it come true.

During the weekend, we recorded what we had learned and presented our work on the blackboard. We wrote the column “All about the Red Flag with Five Stars”, accompanied by photos taken at Tian’anmen Square. Each stroke was finished with our affection toward our national flag and motherland. The red flag had made it to the depth of hearts!

【解析】

本篇书面表达是图画作文，要求描述“国旗在我心中”系列活动的全过程。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求描述“国旗在我心中”系列活动的全过程：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇短文向校刊“英语园地”投稿，记述你班上周组织“国旗在我心中”系列活动的全过程。时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； theme（主题），activity（活动），National Flag in my Heart（国旗在我心中），enhance（加强）， understanding（理解），admiration（钦佩），prosperity（繁荣），national anthem（国歌），patriotism（爱国精神），affection（感情、爱）及symbolize（象征）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。