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12．去年圣诞节前，部分学校决定不允许学生在校园内举行任何与圣诞有关的活动．对于这一决定，不同的学生有不同的看法．

赞成	反对	你的看法
中国学生应该重视传统节日，积极参与传统节日活动，弘扬传统文化．	举办圣诞节活动可以帮助学生了解西方文化，学习西方文明；创造交流、放松的机会，缓解学习压力．	…

参考词汇：carry forward the traditional culture
写作要求：
只能用5个句子表达全部内容．
评分标准：
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．
Before last Christmas，some schools forbade students to hold any Christmas-themed activity or celebration，which caused different opinions on the decision among students．（高分句型） Some are in favor of it because they think that，as Chinese students，they should attach much importance to traditional festivals and take an active part in traditional festival activities to carry forward the traditional culture．（高分句型）（赞成观点） However，other students are against the decision，believing that holding Christmas celebration helps Chinese teenagers have a better understanding of western cultures and learn about western civilization．（高分句型）In addition，it provides a good chance for the students to communicate with each other and relax themselves，which will reduce study pressure．（高分句型）（反对观点）Personally speaking，I think students can choose to celebrate the festivals they like，whether it is a western one or a traditional one．（高分句型）（个人观点）．

Answer 1

分析 分析要求可知，去年圣诞节前，部分学校决定不允许学生在校园内举行任何与圣诞有关的活动．对于这一决定，不同的学生有不同的看法．请结合实际谈谈你的看法．短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称．要求写五个句子，不要太多或太少．尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．
【亮点说明】文中用了一些高级的短语和句式．如：which引导的非限制性定语从句、in favor of、attach much importance to，believing 引导的非谓语句型等都很不错．

解答 Before last Christmas，some schools forbade students to hold any Christmas-themed activity or celebration，which caused different opinions on the decision among students．（高分句型） Some are in favor of it because they think that，as Chinese students，they should attach much importance to traditional festivals and take an active part in traditional festival activities to carry forward the traditional culture．（高分句型）（赞成观点） However，other students are against the decision，believing that holding Christmas celebration helps Chinese teenagers have a better understanding of western cultures and learn about western civilization．（高分句型）In addition，it provides a good chance for the students to communicate with each other and relax themselves，which will reduce study pressure．（高分句型）（反对观点）Personally speaking，I think students can choose to celebrate the festivals they like，whether it is a western one or a traditional one．（高分句型）（个人观点）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．