Question

15．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．
Punishing children is a controversial topic．Everybody has different opinions about how to act to correct a child's behavior．Parents，teachers，doctors and specialists such as psychologists，have disagreements about whether it is good for a child's education to punish him or her．
The word"punish"means different things to different people．Punishment can be physical or emotional．Physical punishment is when the parent hits，slaps or spanks the child．
On the other hand，emotional punishment is when the parent，in order to educate the child，doesn't let him or her watch TV，go to play with his or her friends，or do things like that．The parent doesn't teach him or her，but still he or she punishes the child．
Although many surveys and studies have been made about what the correct way is to raise a child，nobody has the answer or the truth．I think it will be very difficult to find the answer or get people to agree．
I think the parents should love their child and give him or her the best education，but at the same time，they should punish the child if he or she deserves it．I think if you love your child，you should be rational when you apply the punishment．It should be reasonable but strict．
The parents'goal is to have in the future a good man or woman in society，so sometimes you should do what is necessary to get your child to behave well．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇短文主要介绍了关于惩罚孩子的内容．在概括短文时注意要把要点都概括完全，例如人们对惩罚孩子的看法，惩罚分为生理和心理的，怎样正确教育孩子，还有作者自己的看法．注意使用适当的连接词把这些观点连接起来，构成概要．重要短语：
 As a matter of fact，事实上
高分句子：
Proper punishment can be instructive and necessary to children if it is reasonable and strict．，本句中含有if引导的条件状语从句．

解答 People have mixed opinions towards punishment to children．（要点1）Punishment can be physical or emotional，but the way they are punished is the key problem．（要点2）As a matter of fact，it is difficult to find the correct way to raise a child．（要点3）Proper punishment can be instructive and necessary to children if it is reasonable and strict．（高分句型）But love and education are the most important for us to make our kids behave well．（要点4）

点评 概要写作的基础是理解语篇，而读懂语篇的基础是词汇，尤其是对关键词汇的掌握与运用．在此基础上，综合运用语法与句法结构，按照行文逻辑组织语言，形成概要．