Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你作为交换生正在英国学习，你所在城市博物馆正在展出来自中国的文物(relics)因而需要招聘懂一定中国文化的自愿者作为讲解员，需要写一封信给博物馆申请做一名讲解员。

要点如下:1.写信目的。2.个人能力优势。3.能做的事情。

注意:1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

Dear Sir or Medam,

My name is Li Hua.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. As an exchange student from China, I am studying in a local school. I am really delighted to learn that a guide for your Chinese cultural relic exhibition is required and I’m confident that I am truly fit for the position.

To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that I am from China and used to be a volunteer in Shanghai Museum and quite familiar with Chinese relics. Furthermore, being an outgoing and optimistic boy, I am good communicating with others and introducing Chinese culture to the world is always my honor and my pleasure. Finally, there is no problem with my spoken English, as I have lived here for almost a year and I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.

I would really appreciate it if you can offer me the chance to be a volunteer in your museum. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，申请做一名讲解员。。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分总法

总分总法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.写信目的。

2.个人能力优势。

3.能做的事情。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be delighted to; be supposed to do; have no difficulty communicating with ;formal; casual; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.My name is Li Hua. As an exchange student from China, I am studying in a local school.

2.I am really delighted to learn that a guide for your Chinese cultural relic exhibition is required and I’m confident that I am truly fit for the position.

3. I am good communicating with others and introducing Chinese culture to the world is always my honor and my pleasure.

4.Finally, there is no problem with my spoken English, as I have lived here for almost a year and I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.

5.I would really appreciate it if you can offer me the chance to be a volunteer in your museum. I am looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改