Question

6．假如你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖寻求帮助，请根据帖子内容和要求回帖．
问题：我今年14岁了，今年秋天就要去上高中了，但是我的妈妈还把我当做7岁小孩对待，我应该怎么办呢？
写作要点：
（1）告诉Grown-up要理解母亲；
（2）给Grown-up解决问题的具体建议；
（3）可适当发挥，词数100词左右．
Hi，Grown-up，
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Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是一篇话题类作文．需要注意：要合理添加内容，每个要点都要涵盖，注意语句的衔接．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色．注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少．
【高分短语和句型】1．help sb．do sth．帮助某人做某事． 2．let sb do．让某人做梦事． 3．share sth．with sb．和某人分享某事． 4．it用作形式主语：it's good to talk more with your mother.5．定语从句：The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．

解答 Hi，Grown-up，
      As a student of your age，I understand your situation．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．（高分句型一）Here are a few suggestions．
      First，it's good to talk more with your mother．Heart-to-heart talks can help you understand each other better．There are also chances to let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things．（高分句型二）Second，you should learn to do your own things well and let your mother know that you are already a"Grown-up"．It's even better if you could share more of the housework with your mother，such as cleaning，washing，cooking and so on．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                              Yours friendly，
                                                                                                                                                                Li hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．