Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你的笔友林涛来信说，因学习忙、锻炼少，最近经常生病，影响学习。请根据提示写一封英文回信。

要点包括：

1.锻炼的重要性；

2.锻炼有利学习；

3.提出锻炼建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health. It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future, for example, jogging and playing basketball.

Time spent in exercise is wasted. Actually, exercise can improve your physical conditions and ease your mind. Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.

Therefore, I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day. I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信。你的笔友林涛来信说，因学习忙、锻炼少，最近经常生病，影响学习。请根据提示写一封英文回信。要点包括：锻炼的重要性；锻炼有利学习；提出锻炼建议。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，要点突出，文章布局合理，文中使用高级句子。You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health.句中so---that引导结果状语从句，并使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future,句中if引导条件状语从句；Time spent in exercise is wasted.过去分词做后置定语；Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.部分倒装堪称经典；I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day.宾语从句中的省略should的虚拟语气甚是巧妙。