Question

假如你是你校的校园电视台的小记者。下面是你最近对你校100名高一学生早餐情况的一份调查表。请根据这份调查表所提供的情况写一篇100字左右的短文，并呼吁同学们认真对待早餐，说明不吃早餐会对身体带来不利的影响。
文章的开头已经给出，请接着写。
参考词汇： treat…seriously认真对待…； nutrition  n.营养；
nutritious adj. 营养的；     appetite 食欲，胃口

不吃早餐	随便吃一点	吃得够量并且讲究营养
35%	45%	20%
原因：1. 起床较迟，来不及吃早餐；2. 没有胃口，不想吃； 3. 父母忙，不能给孩子准备早餐。

 
Recently I’ve made an investigation among 100 students of
senior one in our school _________________________________
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Answer 1

Recently I’ve made an investigation among 100 students of senior one in our school. About 35 percent students go to school without breakfast while 45 percent students do not treat breakfast seriously. Only 20 percent students have enough breakfast with enough nutrition every morning.
The reason lies in the following facts. Some students don’t get up early and can’t spare any time for breakfast. Some don’t have a good appetite and don’t feel like eating anything. Besides, some parents are so busy that they don’t have enough time to prepare breakfast for their children.
I hold the belief that it won’t do good for us students to go without breakfast. It’s not good for our health. Therefore, we should have enough nutritious food for our breakfast.                               

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文，要点和开头已经给出.我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。要看清题目要求，短文须包括所有要点，但不要逐字翻译；可以适当增加情节，使内容连贯
点评：本文属于话题类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。同时要注意要求的字数，120 ～150，切不可少于120字，同时也不要写得过于冗长，适度即可。