Question

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mr. Green, teacher from Canada, has been taught in our school for two years. He knows much and makes    his classes lively and interesting. Therefore, he is not only strict with us student but also in his work. That’s because he is respected. Kind and patient, Mr. Green    always avoids making you to feel stupid. For example, every time I made a mistake in class, he just smiles, which makes me relaxing. He always speaks in simple English so that he can make himself understand. In his spare time, Mr. Green likes playing the violin. He once said,” Music brings me great comfort whenever I miss his family.”

Answer 1

【答案】

Mr. Green, teacher from Canada, has been taught in our school for twoyears.

Λ a                         teaching

He  knows  much and makes   his classes lively and interesting. Therefore, he is

Besides

not only strict with us student but also in his work. That’s because he is respected.

students                                              why

Kind and patient, Mr. Green always avoids making you to feel stupid. For example,

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every time I made a mistake in class, he just smiles, which makes me relaxing. He

make                                                   relaxed

always speaks in simple English so that he can make himself understand. In his

understood

spare time, Mr. Green likes playing the violin. He once said,” Music brings me

great comfort whenever I miss his family.”

My

【解析】

 （解释他是一位老师）

 （完成进行时表示他一直在教书）

 （上下文是递进关系而表示因果关系）

 （我们的复数形式）

 （后面这句话表示的是结果而不是原因）

 （固定结果make sb do sth）

 (整个文章是现在时)

 （感到轻松的）

 （让他被理解）

 （直接引语中指Mr. Green）