Question

10．在生活中有人喜欢运动，也有人不太喜欢运动，你校就"学校应不应该召开运动会"进行了调查，请根据以下调查结果写一篇150词左右的短文，并简要发表你自己的观点．以下是调查结果：
注意：1．根据要点可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
2．字数150左右．文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名．
注：增强体质 build up one's strength
Some people like sport while others not in our life．Recently，our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not，students'opinions are divided on the topic．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting，thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies．学生可以通过在运动会的比赛中学会成功和失败，从而鼓励他们在学习中努力学习．本句中用非谓语动词中的现在分词在句中做状语，encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies．
亮点句型二：Besides，taking part in the sports meeting，they think，will have a negative effect on their studies．此外，他们认为参加运动会对他们的学习会产生负面影响．本句中非谓语动词中的动名词做主语 taking part in the sports meeting．

解答 Some people like sport while others not in our life．Recently，our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not，students'opinions are divided on the topic．
        80%of the students think sport does them good．First of all，sport helps them build up their strength，keeping them healthy．In addition，it helps develop students'ability to cooperate with each other．Plus，students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting，thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies．（亮点句型一）
     However，20% of them hold the opposite view，arguing that sport is not the only way to keep healthy．What's worse，some of them might get injured in the sports meeting．Besides，taking part in the sports meeting，they think，will have a negative effect on their studies．（亮点句型二）
    As far as I'm concerned，it's a good choice to hold a sports meeting．For one thing，we can develop team spirit by participating in sports and games．For another，it's a good way of relaxing ourselves，making our school life colorful．

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．