Question

【题目】书面表达

生活中充满了选择，学会自主选择有助于我们的成长。请以“An important choice I have made”为题，用英语写一篇120词的短文，记述一次对你影响深远的选择。

内容要点：

1.记述选择的经过；

2.结合此次经历，简要说明自主选择的重要性。

注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入词数。

An important choice I have made

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Answer 1

【答案】

As a saying goes, a burden of one's choice is not felt.

However, it was not until last year when I was asked to decide on arts or science that I understood what it meant. The choice was really tough, so I asked my parents and friends for advice. Unsurprisingly, most of them tried to talk me into choosing science for a promising future career, but history and English were what interested me most. Therefore, having analysed my strengths and weaknesses, I elected to take up arts. For the first time ever, I followed my heart, and I have been enjoying everything all along ever since.

Life is full of choices, and to live is to choose. I’ve got to realize that if you don’t make a choice, the choice makes you. And I am proud I can be responsible for my own future by making my own choices.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的主题是An important choice I have made，记述一件印象深的选择，本文贴近自己的生活，比较有话说。对于此类文章，要注意一下几点：1、首先，要根据自己的实际生活经历来记述一件印象深的选择；2、其次，描述事件的原因、过程、结果时，可以多用一些连接词来时文章顺畅；3、最后，要注意点出文章的主题，文章的主题要与所写内容有关；4、注意单词、词组、句式的运用来给文章增色。

【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类文章的写作，要善于使用不同的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换。文章按照时间顺序来写，使用了However，Unsurprisingly，Therefore，For the first time ever这样的词来连接文章。学生在写作时也要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，本文运用了talk me into，followed my heart，make a choice，be responsible for等短语。本文也有很多句型值得学习，如As a saying goes, a burden of one's choice is not felt.爱挑的担子不嫌重，英语谚语，it was not until last year when I was asked to decide on arts or science that I understood what it meant.从句，having analysed my strengths and weaknesses, I elected to take up arts.非谓语动词。