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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I began to learn English before about ten years ago, I wasn't very interesting in it. As a result, I didn't learn it well. My mother thought it was important of me to learn English well, but she became worried. Lucky for me, one of our neighbor named Jenny was good at English. My mother let her teach me English in my free time. Jenny was a wonderful teacher. She helped us realize that English was beautiful language. I fell in love with the language soon and decided to learning it well. In the following three years, I practice English with her and could finally speak it fluently.

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【答案】①去掉before ②interesting改为interested ③of改为for ④but改为so ⑤Lucky改为Luckily ⑥neighbor改为neighbors ⑦us改为me ⑧was后面加a ⑨learning改为learn ⑩practice改为practiced
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述自己的的母亲帮助其学英语的经历。①词义重复。句意：当大约十年前开始学习英语，“about ten years ago”表示大约十年前，before多余。故把before去掉。②形容词误用。此处表示“感兴趣的”，修饰主语I，应该用interested.故把interesting改为interested。③介词误用。It is+形容词+for/of sb. to do sth.是固定句型，形容词修饰的是做某事，句型中用for sb.，译为“做某事对于某人是…”；形容词修饰的是sb.，句型中用of sb.，译为“某人做某事是…”。故把of改为for。（4）并列词误用。根据分析句子可知，前后半句是因果关系，故把but改为so。⑤副词误用。此处副词作状语，故把Lucky改为Luckily。⑥名词的数误用。句中表示“我的邻居们其中之一”，one of后面跟名词复数，neighbor应该用复数。故把neighbor改为neighbors。⑦代词误用。根据上文一直介绍母亲对我的帮助，因此本句中us应该改为me。⑧冠词误用。英语是一门语言，language是单数可数名词，前面应该用不定冠词，根据beautiful 读音是以辅音开头，用a.故加上a。⑨不定式误用。decide后面跟to do sth.，故把learning改为learn.⑩时态误用。本篇一直介绍过去的事情，用一般过去时，并根据“In the following three years”也是表达过去的时间，故把practice改为practiced.