Question

15．昨天我校邀请知名校友李先生为高三学生作报告，请你根据以下要点为我校英文期刊Shoots写一篇100字左右的报道：
1．校友回忆在我校学习的经历；
2．校友的成功及对母校的感激；
3．自己听报告后的感想．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好．
Yesterday we invited Mr．Li，a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school，to give a speech to us Senior 3 students．All of us felt deeply touched by his lecture and proud of our distinguished schoolmate．
Mr．Li once studied in this same school many years ago and later he went to a famous university in the North．（高分句型一）After graduation，he devoted his life to teaching in the rural areas of our country for more than 30 years．His devotion and selflessness are highly thought of by all his students as well as by the society．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，he donated many books to our school and showed deep affection to his former teachers and his high school．
As a senior high school student，I'm determined to learn from Mr．Li and become a worthwhile schoolmate of our school．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 析题干可知，全文为一般过去时．
报道主要分三部分：
①首先，用一句话作为导语写出主要事件，即说明昨天我们邀请了李先生来我们学校给大三学生做了报告．
distinguished 著名的；give a speech 发表演讲，做报告．
②其次，介绍李先生的事迹．
devote one's life to doing 奉献某人的一生…，as well as 和，be highly thought of 高度评价．
③最后，总结自己的收获．
be determined to do sth．下定决心做某事．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be touched by被…所感动；be proud of因为…而自豪； be highly thought of被高度评价；as well as 也，和；Meanwhile同时；
Mr．Li once studied in this same school many years ago and later he went to a famous university in the North．（高分句型一）
His devotion and selflessness are highly thought of by all his students as well as by the society．（高分句型二）
 As a senior high school student，I'm determined to learn from Mr．Li and become a worthwhile schoolmate of our school．（高分句型三）

解答 Yesterday we invited Mr．Li，a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school to give a speech to us Senior 3 students．All of us felt deeply touched by his lecture and proud of our distinguished schoolmate．
       Mr．Li once studied in this same school many years ago and later he went to a famous university in the North．（高分句型一）After graduation，he devoted his life to teaching in the rural areas of our country for more than 30 years．His devotion and selflessness are highly thought of by all his students as well as by the society．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，he donated many books to our school and showed deep affection to his former teachers and his high school．
       As a senior high school student，I'm determined to learn from Mr．Li and become a worthwhile schoolmate of our school．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．