Question

你校举办了创意作品比赛，请为校报写一篇英语快讯，报道比赛的情况。
【写作内容】

＊废物：waste materials      ＊＊创意作品：creative works
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Answer 1

Aiming to cultivate the good habit of protecting the environment, the Students Union held a creative works competition with the theme of making good use of waste materials. From Feb. 3rd to Mar. 15th, more than 900 students participated and presented through the Internet over 1,000 pieces of works. About 200 participants got the first, second and third prizes respectively. Li Ming, whose works – “Protecting the forests, including you and me!” was made of old newspapers and magazines, got the first place. In this activity, the students not only have shown their enthusiasm, but also have raised their awareness of environmental protection.

解析试题分析：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇作文要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容，所以范文中使用长句较多：Aiming to cultivate the good habit of protecting the environment, the Students Union held a creative works competition with the theme of making good use of waste materials.这句话使用了现在分词做状语， Li Ming, whose works – “Protecting the forests, including you and me!” was made of old newspapers and magazines, got the first place. 这句话使用了定语从句，In this activity, the students not only have shown their enthusiasm, but also have raised their awareness of environmental protection. 这句话使用了not only…but also…不但…而且。
考点：考查提纲式写作