[题目]假定你是李华.最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到飓风侵袭.损失惨重.请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信.信的内容包括:1. 得知情况及感受,2. 表达安慰和鼓励,3. 打算提供的帮助.注意:1. 词数100左右,2. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

【题目】假定你是李华，最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到飓风(hurricane)侵袭，损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括：

1. 得知情况及感受；

2. 表达安慰和鼓励；

3. 打算提供的帮助。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

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【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss. Shocked to learn the terrible news, I feel upset about your suffering.

Though sorrowful, you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions. I think you, as a strong-willed person, can get through this difficult period. You will definitely gather all your courage to face and handle the mess that the hurricane brought about.

Thinking about your present situation, I feel sincere pity for you, and I’ll be there for you whenever you need any help! If necessary, I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.

Never give up hope and be strong! Longing for good news from you!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封慰问信，表达对朋友的关心和帮助。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时，一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：分-总法

分-总法指分点表达要点之后，在最后进行总结。

要求：

1. 得知情况及感受；

2. 表达安慰和鼓励；

3. 打算提供的帮助。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

horrible，severe，hurricane, hit , loss, upset , stand up to, get through, bring about, whenever ,help, call on, make a donation, give up

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss.

2. I feel upset about your suffering

3. you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions

4. I think you, as a strong-willed person, can get through this difficult period.

5…. face and handle the mess that the hurricane brought about.

6. I feel sincere pity for you

7. I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.

8. Never give up hope

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

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