Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As it is known to all, the Great Wall is one of the most famous tourist attraction in China. Everybody wants to get there, but I am no exception. Then, during this summer vacation, the day I had been looking forward to coming last. Exciting, I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followed behind. After a two-hour bus ride, we arrived at what looked like large market, that there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. Owing for that, my enthusiasm immediately disappeared. Indeed, for me, the Great Wall is real something that must be experienced with ease and privacy.

Answer 1

【答案】1.去掉it

2.attraction→attractions

3.but→and

4.coming→come

5.Exciting→Excited

6.followed→following

7.like后添加a

8.that→where

9.for→to

10.real→really

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要记叙了作者暑假去游览中国长城的经历。

1.考查定语从句。句意：众所周知，长城是中国最著名的名胜。此处为as引导的非限制性定语从句，as引导定语从句，并在句中作主语，故此处无需it。故去掉it。

2.考查名词的数。attraction为可数名词，根据上文one of后跟复数形式表示“……其中之一”可知，应用名词复数形式。故attraction改为attractions。

3.考查连词。句意：为每个人都想去那里，我也不例外。此处为并列关系，无转折关系。故but改为and。

4.考查动词时态。come作此句的谓语动词，这一天已经到了，故应用一般过去时。故coming改为came。

5.考查形容词。此处修饰主语I的状语，应用-ed结尾形容词excited，表示“兴奋的”。故Exciting改为Excited。

6.考查非谓语动词。此处为with的复合结构，且Tim与follow构成主动关系，故用现在分词。故followed改为following。

7.考查冠词。market为可数名词，此处表示泛指应用不定冠词，且large为辅音音素开头的单词故用a。故like后添加a。

8.考查定语从句。此处为非限定性定语从句修饰上文market，且先行词在从句中做地点状语，故用关系副词where。故that改为where。

9.考查介词。根据短语owing to表示“因为，由于”。故for改为to。

10.考查副词。此处修饰后文整个句子应用副词really。故real改为really。