Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，你的朋友沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1.表示理解和关心；2.提出具体建议。

要求：1。词数100左右；2。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3。格式与词尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

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I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I’m sorry to here that you’re suffering from WeChat addiction. I really understand how you feel and I’d like to offer you some useful advice that I think will benefit you.

First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc, which will take your mind off WeChat. Secondly, you’d better make more friends through face-to-face communication. They’ll assist you when you can’t resist the temptation of WeChat. Thirdly, it’s better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life and help you forget WeChat.

I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible. Best wishes!

【解析】试题分析：假设你叫李华，你的朋友沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：表示理解和关心；提出具体建议。写作时把所提示的点写全，但不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时注意准确运用时态、语态。适当使用并列连词，合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】

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