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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday I went to the Great Wall with some of my friends.In our way up,we saw many volunteers working in the sun.They helped the elders with their bags,took photo for some tourists and answered people's questions.Because they were very tired,they didn't stop to have a rest.Just at the moment,we saw a little boy standing alone,cried.We went over and asked what is the matter.From his answer we knew he couldn't find her mother.We told him not to worry and then we tried to get in the touch with his mother with the phone number he had given us. Twenty minutes late,his mother turned up,and thanked us again and again.That day we enjoyed the beauty of the Great Wall,and felt the warm of the society.If everyone can reach out helping to others,the world will be more harmonious.

Answer 1

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【解析】1. on our way up 在我们的路上,可知把in---on。

2.句意：为一些游客拍了一些照片。take photos拍照，故把photo---photos。

3.句意：尽管他们很累，但是他们没有停下来休息。此处是though/although引导的让步状语从句，故把because---though/although。

4.句意：我们看到一个小男孩独自站在那里哭。此处是现在分词做伴随状语，故把cried---crying。

5.句意：我们走过去问发生什么事了。根据句意可知用一把过去时态，故把is---was。

6.句意：从他的回答中我们知道他不能找到他的妈妈。根据前面的a little boy，可知把her---his。

7.固定词组：get in th touch with sb.与某人取得联系，故把get in the touch with中的the去掉。

8.句意：二十分钟之后。故把late---later。

9.句意：感到了社会的温暖。The用在名词前面，故把warm---warmth。

10.句意：如果每个人都能向别人伸出帮助的手，世界将变得更和谐。reach out a helping to sb. 向某人伸出援助之手。故在helping前加a。