Question

请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下面所列的内容要点写一篇英语短文。
1．学会对自己微笑：生活中会有不愉快的事；微笑使你自信。
2．学会对他人微笑：微笑使人与人更亲近。
3．微笑是一种语言：人人都能懂。
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注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以连贯行文；
2．120词左右。       
Learn to Smile

Answer 1

Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude to life. In our life, there may always be something unpleasant. At times, you fail in an exam; at other times, you are misunderstood by your friends or have a quarrel with your parents.
These unpleasant things may make you feel bad. Then what will you do? Why not learn to smile? Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence. Often, the greatest enemy is yourself. That’s to say, sometimes, you are beaten by yourself.
We should also learn to smile to others. It will help us to get closer to others. So, smile is the most widely understood language.

解析试题分析：考查提纲类短文写作。主题是关于学生要学会微笑的主题，文章给出三个要点第四个要考生自己发挥，考生需要把要点翻译成英语。在写作的时候注意使用高级的句式，如：Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence.这里的动名词做主语，也使用了短语bring back不要总是使用单调的陈述句，这篇文章使用了一些疑问句。Then what will you do? Why not learn to smile?还有文章里的关联词较多At times, at other times, That’s to say, sometimes,使文章读起来通顺。
考点：考查提纲类短文写作
点评：提纲类的短文写作是考生一直在训练的文章类型。不要遗漏文章的要点。在写作的时候注意选择高级的词汇来提升文章的层次。也要用些关联词把文章连贯起来。