假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增删或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八).并在其下面写出该加的词,删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,修改:在错的词下面画一条横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有
10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增删或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下面画一条横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
It was raining hardly outside，that made it difficult for me to go home for lunch．Just as I was
wondering what I should eat at noon，I saw a familiar figure passes by our classroom．I rushed out
and it was my mother，who is already in her fifty，that brought me lunch．In China，many parents
do so much for our children．But what had the children done return？All too often，most children
just think that their parents should serve for them unconditionally．My dear mom or dad，thank you
very much for bringing me up．How shall I do for your．

分析有一天下大雨，我没法回家吃饭．就在我不知道中午吃什么的时候，母亲送来了饭．有很多中国的孩子总认为父母为孩子做事天经地义．我觉得孩子们要懂得感恩．

解答 It was raining hardly outside，that made it difficult for me to go home for lunch．Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon，I saw a familiar figure passes by our classroom．I rushed out and it was my mother，who is already in her fifty，that brought me lunch．In China，many parents do so much for our children．But what had the children done∧return？All too often，most children just think that their parents should serve for them unconditionally．My dear mom or dad，thank you very much for bringing me up．How shall I do for you．
详解：
1．hardly改为hard；副词错误．句中hardly是否定副词，表示几乎不；句意表达的是雨下得大，要用hard来修饰，rain hard下大雨．
2．that改为which；连词错误．句中made it difficult for me to go home for lunch修饰前面整个句子内容，表示一件事，要用which来引导．
3．passes改为pass；短语搭配错误．see sb do sth看到某人做了某事．
4．fifty改为fifties；短语搭配错误．in one's fifties五十几岁．
5．our改为their；代词错误．句意指代的是parents，要用their来指代．
6．had改为have；时态错误．句意表达的是结果，要用现在完成时态．
7．加in；短语搭配错误．in return报答；return是归还的意思．
8．for去掉．动词搭配错误．serve for充当，起作用，后不能接人；句意表达的是为…服务，serve及物动词，不需要加介词．
9．or改为and；连词错误．句意表达的是并列，不是选择．
10．How改为What；特殊疑问词错误．句中do后缺少宾语，且句意表达的是事情，要用what来构成疑问．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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