Question

1．如果你可以随心所欲地度过一天，你会怎么过？请用英文写一篇短文，第一段说明你会邀请谁和你一起度过这一天？为什么？第二段描述你会去哪里？做些什么事？为什么？
注意：
1．邀请的人可以是亲朋好友也可以是古令中外的名人；
2．词数：100-120 词．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Living without worrying about the budget is such a wonderful gift for me and I will definitely share the chance with grandmother，who has devoted herself to raising family since the age of eighteen．
高分句型二：
The diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scene will certainly impress her，taking her for a spa and a nice restaurant is also in my mind．
句型一 ①Living without worrying about the budget is such…该句使用了现在分词短语作主语，此时谓语应注意为单数．
           ②who has devoted herself to raising family since the age of eighteen．该句是一个由who 作关系代词，且who 在句中作主语的非限制性定语从句，who 替代前面的先行词my grandmother
句型二 taking her for a spa and a nice restaurant is also in my mind．此处使用了现在分词短语在句中作伴随状语．
此外，还使用到了重要的短语：as a result因此    after all 毕竟

解答 Living without worrying about the budget is such a wonderful gift for me and I will definitely share the chance with grandmother，who has devoted herself to raising family since the age of eighteen．（高分句型一）She has taught me somany precious lessons that are never mentioned in my textbooks．Being a green thumb，my grandmother  is fond of gardening．As a result，I will take her to Hangzhou botanic garden．The diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scene will certainly impress her，taking her for a spa and a nice restaurant is also in my mind．（高分句型二）After all，she has suffered for the whole life．I sincerely hope she could lead a relaxed，happy life ever after．

点评 本书面表达偏开放类，此类作文给出写作素材，考生在写作时要注意根据提示，结合自己的学习或生活经历展开叙述，这样的作文给了考生很大的自由发挥的空间，写作时切忌过度发散思维，应符合实际．