Question

2．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
Forming good study habits is a great start on a path to success．Even small changes can make a big difference and，over time，will change not only your approach to studying and organizing but your overall outlook on school and work．
Having effective （有效的） study habits creates a more efficient academic environment．Planning your study schedule in advance and faithfully sticking to it saves time．Even giving consideration to small details makes a difference．Developing an efficient study plan can make your academic life go much more smoothly．
When you have good study habits，you tend to be less stressed．Students who are anxious on exam days are typically those who came unprepared．Students who organize their lives and stick to their study schedules are confident and relaxed at test-taking time．
Regardless of whether you are setting a good example for classmates or for friends，showing good study habits can have a positive effect on those around you．Your friends and classmates may turn to their own studies as your study．Your roommates may be inspired to organize their own rooms and study plans．
【写作内容】
1．以约30词概括短文的内容要点；
2．以约120词就"养成良好学习习惯"进行讨论，内容包括：
（1）你有哪些好的学习习惯；
（2）好的学习习惯帮助你成功的经历；
（3）如何才能养成良好的学习习惯．
【写作要求】
1．你可以使用实例或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名．
【评分标准】概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Having good habits and skills can also influence those around you．
高分句型二：
When you have made a plan，stick to it for at least one week，no matter how hard it is．
句型一　Having good habits and skills can also influence．．该句主语为动名词短语充当，注意：动名词、不定式和从句作主语时，谓语用单数
句型二　①When you have made a plan 该句是一个由when引导的时间状语从句，when在句中作时间状语②no matter how hard it is 该句是一个由no matter how 引导的让步状语从句
此外，该文章中还有以下重要短语和词汇：
benefit  from 从．．中受益  thanks to 多亏  stick to  坚持
重要句型和重点短语的结合使用，使得文章表达更有层次，表达更为准确

解答 By developing good study habits，you will work more efficiently and experiencing less stress in the learning process．Having good habits and skills can also influence those around you．（高分句型一）（要点概括）
　　As for me，I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to read English aloud，going over what I have learned before going to bed，and listening to some English programs every day．In the past，I dared not speak English because I was poor in pronunciation．Thanks to my good habits，however，I have been making progress in my English speaking．Now I'm actively involved in the discussion in English classes，and also，I'm doing much better in english exams．（个人经历）
　　Therefore，I think it is of great significance to cultivate good study habits．When you have made a plan，stick to it for at least one week，no matter how hard it is．（高分句型二）Then you may find it is not as difficult as it appeared．Besides，finding a partner to study together with is also a good way to keep you motivated．（良好习惯养成方法）

点评 该书面表达为读写任务型作文，该篇作文规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．