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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(x)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

On Mother's Day,Tom stopped his car outside a flower's shop.He wanted to order some nice flowers and ask a shop to deliver them to his mother.He was about to enter the shop while he saw a little girl crying by the roadside.Tom asked her for what had happened.The girl said she wanted to buy a rose for her mother,and had no money.Hearing this,Tom went in and bought a beautifully rose for the girl.Then he offered to drive her home,but she insisted she was going to another town by bus to send the rose to mother.Tom was so touching that he changed his mind.After driving her to the bus station,he returned to the shop,buy a large bunch of flowers, and drove all the way to his mother.He would give the flowers to his mother with person.

【答案】第一句:flower’sflower

第二句:athe

第三句:whilewhen

第四句:去掉介词for

第五句:andbut

第六句:beautifullybeautiful

第七句:mother前面加her

第八句:touchingtouched

第九句:buybought

第十句:within

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。母亲节,汤姆准备定一束花,让花店把花送给妈妈。然后他碰到了一位没钱,但是想给妈妈买玫瑰的小女孩,他给她买了一束漂亮的玫瑰。接着他主动提出送她回家,但小女孩坚持坐公交车去另外一个小镇,把花送给她的妈妈。被小女孩所感动,汤姆决定买一束花,并亲自把花送给自己的妈妈。


第一处:考查名词作定语。“花店”在英语中为flower shop, 英语中,名词可以作定语修饰名词,作定语的名词往往是说明其中名词的材料、用途、时间、地点、内容、类别等。故将flower’s改成flower。

第二处:考查定冠词。这里的花店是指前文提到过的“a flower shop”,为特指,应该用定冠词来修饰。故将a改成the。

第三处:考查固定句型。句意:汤姆正准备走进这家店时,看见一位小女孩在路边哭泣。这里使用的是固定句型be about to do...when( 刚要做某事时,此时……),故将while改成when。

第四处:考查固定搭配。句意:汤姆问她发生了什么。ask sb sth为固定搭配,意为“问某人某事”,ask sb for sth意为“向别人索要什么”,根据句意,这里使用的是ask sb sth结构,for是多余的,故将for去掉。

第五处:考查连词。根据前文“The girl said she wanted to buy a rose for her mother,”可知女孩想要给妈妈买花,根据后文“ had no money.”可知小女孩没钱,前后文为转折关系,应该用but,而不是and连接前后文,故将and改成but。

第六处:考查形容词。修饰名词rose,应用形容词,故将beautifully改成beautiful。

第七处:考查形容词性物主代词。句意:接着他主动提出送她回家,但她坚持坐公交车去另外一个小镇,把花送给她的妈妈。根据句意,这里女孩送花的对象是自己的妈妈,所以为了表意明确,在mother前加her。

第八处:考查形容词。句意:汤姆如此感动,以至于他改变了主意。touching意为“令人感动的”,用在此处不符合句意,touched意为“感到感动的”符合句意,故将touching改成touched。

第九处:考查时态。分析可知return,buy以及drove是并列谓语,文章中的事情发生在过去,全文为一般过去时,所以buy的时态不对。故将buy改成bought。

第十处:考查介词。句意:他会亲自给自己的妈妈送花。根据句意这里要表达的是“亲自送花”,in person为固定搭配,意为“亲自地”符合句意,故将with改成in。

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