Question

【题目】假定你是某中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友John来信说想来你所在的城市——北京旅游，想让你介绍一下旅游景点，并希望你担任导游。他在信中还问及环境和交通问题，请你在回信中解答。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I'm very glad that you'll come to our city.I will act as your guide during your stay here.

There are many places of interest in and around Beijing City,such as the Great Wall,one of the Seven Wonders in the world and the Forbidden City,which has a history of over six hundred years.There we can enjoy delicious food, traditional cultures and customs.

As for the environmental problems,the government has taken strong measures to protect the environment.For example,restricting the number of private cars and encouraging public buses and subway not only prevent the traffic jam but also greatly benefit the environment.

I really wish you a pleasant stay here.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇以书信形式的作文，注意书信的格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
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