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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意：修改10处，在横线上写出错误指出，并加以修改。
In a freezing cold day in January 1994,Jiesang Suonandajie found that he was looking ①改为②改为
for-a group of poachers who were killing the endanger Tibetan antelope. Jiesang knew he ③改为 ④改为
had to move quick.He shouted to the poachers to put down his guns. Although surprising,⑤改为 ⑥改为
the poachers had an advantage -there were fewer of them. In the battle which followed ⑦改为 ⑧改为
Jiesang shot and killed. When his frozen body was found hours late he was still holding his ⑨改为 ⑩改为
gun. He had given his life save the Tibetan antelope.

Answer 1

【答案】In；On；that；what；endanger；endangered；quick；quickly；his；their；surprising；surprisd；fewer；more；shot；was shot；late；later；save；to save
【解析】1在具体的某一天用on。
2主语是...looking for后少宾语，故用what。
3形容词做定语，故endanger 改为endangerde。
4修饰动词用副词，所以改成quickly。
5指代的是poachers的枪，所以改成their。
6形容词surprising是令人吃惊的，句子是虽然感到吃惊，所以改成surprised.
7句意，偷猎者有有事--人数较多，所以改成more。
8被动语态，Jiesang是被打中了，所以加上was。
9几小时后应是hours later。
10目的状语，故save前填to。