Question

假设你是学校的学生会主席，你校计划下周举行为抚顺洪水灾区人民献爱心捐助活动，请你代表学生会向同学们发出倡议，要点如下：

1. 受灾严重，急需食品、衣物和药品等； 2. 号召学生捐款捐物， 会尽快送往灾区； 3. 你的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Teachers and fellow students,

   As we all know , a terrible flood broke out in Fushun, Liaoning Province .People have suffered great losses in their lives and properties since then.

   It’s reported that many houses were destroyed as a consequence of the flood ,and local people , who are badly in need of food , clothes and medicine , are living a hard life now .Here Students’ Union calls on everyone to give away your old clothes and pocket money generously .All the clothes and the money to be collected will be sent to the flood –stricken areas as soon as possible.

  My fellow friends , “blood is thicker than water”.The flood made all our hearts links together .please hold out your hands and donate your love without hesitation.We believe miracles can be created and a great many lives will be saved .

  That’s all .Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是一份倡议书。倡议书在结构安排上要首先讲明发生的事件，事件的进展和当前的现状。然后就此发出倡议，提出要求。其次在语言方面要真诚感人，要适当使用祈使句来增强号召力。而在时态方面则要根据需要选择一般过去时、现在进行时、一般现在时或者将来时态。比如叙述事件部分就要使用一般过去时。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构安排合理，是一篇很具有号召力的倡议书。作者使用的祈使句.please hold out your hands and donate your love without hesitation、谚语blood is thicker than water 和被动句We believe miracles can be created and a great many lives will be saved .很好地激发了人们的情感，引起人内心的共鸣，增强了人们战胜困难的决心。此外句式的多变，长短句的结合，也是本文的一大亮点。

考点：考查提纲作文。