Question

【题目】假如你是John，你的朋友李华今年考入了北京大学，请用英语给他写封信，信的内容包括：

1.高兴他考入北京大学；

2.请他传授一些学习方法；

3.祝他在大学里生活学习愉快。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Hua,

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Yours,

John

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Hua,

Sincere congratulations on your admission to Peking University! I’m really delighted to see that your hard work has paid off.

Since I am going to take the National College Entrance Examination next year, I hope that you can share some effective methods you used in high school. For example, how did you reasonably manage your time? Sometimes I do not even have enough time to finish my homework. Moreover, could you please tell me how to deal with stress and anxiety? I have been under pressure for a long time, espcially when I am not satisfied with my grades. Thank you very much indeed.

May you enjoy yourself in Peking University! Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

John

【解析】本文是一篇祝贺信。你的朋友李华今年考入了北京大学，请用英语给他写封信祝贺信、包括以下内容：1.高兴他考入北京大学；2.请他传授一些学习方法；3.祝他在大学里生活学习愉快。写信的语言应做到真诚、自然和亲切。

亮点：本文结构完整，条理清楚。语言真诚。使用了多种句式。如宾语从句，状语从句，祁使句等，同时还使用了复杂句。在文章中使用了许多的固定搭配及高级词汇，让增添了文章的色彩，更生动活泼。而连词moreover等的运用让文章更有条理。

文章中运用了由that引导的宾语从句：I’m really delighted to see that your hard work has paid off。由when引导的时间状语从句：I have been under pressure for a long time, espcially when I am not satisfied with my grade。和祁使句：May you enjoy yourself in Peking University!

一般疑问句：could you please tell me how to deal with stress and anxiety? 而复杂句：Since I am going to take the National College Entrance Examination next year, I hope that you can share some effective methods you used in high school.复杂句的使用给文章增色不少。

在文章中大量使用固定搭配如：Sincere congratulations on … be delighted to do.,pay off，manage one’s time , be satisfied with，enjoy oneself等，使文章更有层次感。使用了连词如moreover，让文章更有条理。