【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中询问北京近几年的变化。请你根据以下要点进行回复。内容包括:
1.变化是什么
2.对你的影响;
3.期待朋友来北京
注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s so nice to hear from you. Knowing that you want to learn about the changes in Beijing these years, I’m more than willing to tell you.
In the past few years, great changes have indeed taken place in Beijing. To start with, Beijing boasts itself as a more and more international city with many big international events like Olympic Games held there. More and more foreign companies are set here which bring in more foreign people working and living here. Besides, there are more roads and subways built or being built, which relieved the problem of traffic jams in this busy capital. Shared bikes have become popular in Beijing as well. Speaking of the problem of air pollution, many measure like traffic control, using electricity or gas as fuel instead of coal…have been taken, which turn out well.
I’m taking all the advantages of all those changes as I am now riding a shared bike to school every day, breathing fresh air as well as keeping my body fit. You must have sensed my progress in English wording, since I enjoy talking with my foreign teacher and learn from him in my oral English class.
Anyway, I can’t wait to have you here to witness all those changes yourself. Come, and you will be stunned.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,给英国朋友Jim介绍一下北京的变化。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.变化是什么
2.对你的影响;
3.期待朋友来北京
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Learn about; take place; boast; international city; subways; bring in; traffic jams; shared bikes; take measures to do; turn out; take advantage of; can’t wait to do; stun..
第三步:连词成句
1. Knowing that you want to learn about the changes in Beijing these years, I’m more than willing to tell you.
2. In the past few years, great changes have indeed taken place in Beijing
3 Beijing boasts itself as a more and more international city with many big international events like Olympic Games held there.
4. More and more foreign companies are set here which bring in more foreign people working and living here.
5 It relieved the problem of traffic jams in this busy capital.
6. Shared bikes have become popular in Beijing as well.
7. Many measure like traffic control, using electricity or gas as fuel instead of coal…have been taken, which turns out well.
8. I’m taking all the advantages of all those changes.
9. I can’t wait to have you here to witness all those changes yourself.
10. Come, and you will be stunned.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
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