Question

2．下面是某高中对200名高三学生每天睡眠时间不足及其原因所做调查的结果．请根据图1提供的信息描述高三学生的睡眠情况，并针对图2中任何一个数据所反映的情况分析原因，并提出你的看法．
参考词汇：图表 chart n．
注意：1．文中不得出现考生的具体信息；
2．词数 100 左右．
We have made a survey recently about how much time Senior 3 students can sleep every day among 200 students in a senior high school．The result shows that sixty-two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day，while thirty-seven percent of them can sleep seven to eight hours．However，only one percent of them say they can sleep over eight hours．We can conclude that most of Senior 3 students don't have enough sleep．
From Chart 2，we learn the reasons why most Senior 3 students don't have enough sleep．The students who don't have enough sleep because of staying up make up thirty-five percent of all the 200 students．
For the sake of the health of the students，I think it is unwise to stay up too late．Only when we have a good sleep can we have the energy to make the best of the daytime in an effective way．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
The result shows that sixty-two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day，while thirty-seven percent of them can sleep seven to eight hours
结果表明，百分之六十二的学生每天睡眠不超过七小时，而百分之三十七的人可以睡七到八个小时．
高分句型二：
Only when we have a good sleep can we have the energy to make the best of the daytime in an effective way．
只有好好睡一觉，我们才能有充分利用白天的精力．

解答 We have made a survey recently about how much time Senior 3 students can sleep every day among 200 students in a senior high school．The result shows that sixty-two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day，while thirty-seven percent of them can sleep seven to eight hours（高分句型一）．However，only one percent of them say they can sleep over eight hours．We can conclude that most of Senior 3 students don't have enough sleep．
From Chart 2，we learn the reasons why most Senior 3 students don't have enough sleep．The students who don't have enough sleep because of staying up make up thirty-five percent of all the 200 students．
For the sake of the health of the students，I think it is unwise to stay up too late．Only when we have a good sleep can we have the energy to make the best of the daytime in an effective way（高分句型二）．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．