Question

在日常学习、工作和生活中，学会与人合作非常重要。为此，你班贴出了一张通知。 请根据通知、写作要点和要求写一篇英语演讲稿。

Notice Our monitor suggests that we hold an English Speech on January 25th. Everyone is invited to attend the speech. Those who will attend it, please get ready for your speech before it. The topic of the speech is “Being a good partner”. March 23th, 2014

写作要点：
1. 与人合作的重要性;  2. 怎样成为一个好的合作伙伴（2-3条建议); 3. 你理想的合作伙伴是怎样的。
写作要求：
1. 短文填写在答题卡的指定区域;     2. 短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分);
3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯;  4. 书写须清楚、工整。
Good afternoon, everyone!                                                        
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
That’s all. Thank you.  

Answer 1

One possible version
Good afternoon , everyone! The topic of my speech today is “being a good partner”. Cooperation is a good way for us to learn from each other as well as to save us a lot of time and energy Thus we can complete our work successful and efficiently.
How can we become a good partner? My suggestion are as follows. Firstly, we should try to listen to others’ opinions and never force your ideas on others. Secondly, no one in the world is perfect. Let’s learn to put up with their shortcomings and discover their advantages, which will surely encourage each other to do the best.
As far as I’m concerned, when I am lucky enough to find someone who is easy-going and warm-hearted to cooperate with, it will make us feel very happy. On the other hand, However, a person who is hard-working and strong-minded will have a good effect on me. Hope you are a good partner for me.
That’s all. Thank you!

解析试题分析:提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文包含了写作要点：1.合作的重要性；2.对怎样成为一个好的合作伙伴提出了first、second两条建议；3. 描述了自己理想的合作伙伴。文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如My suggestion are as follows. As far as I’m concerned和who引导的定语从句.，还运用了put up with、have a good effect on等。并注意了句子句子之间的衔接如用Thus，However，On the other hand等等。
考点:提纲类作文。