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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Good morning, everyone!

Nowadays, topics concerned with health are always drawing our attention. As is knew to all, health is the most important thing in the world. But how can we keep health? My views are as follow.

Firstly, eat in a proper way. It's good for us to eat which are rich in vitamins and minerals every day, that was, some fresh vegetables and fruit. And breakfast is necessary, that gives us energy for the morning. Secondly, exercise regularly. Exercise can benefit physically and mentally. Thirdly, get enough sleep. Stay up late is bad for our health. Go to bed early and we will feel refreshed in next morning.

Last and not least, enjoy the time with our friends and family.

That's all.Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】本文作者就如何保持健康这一问题，给出了一些自己的建议。

第一处：考查固定用法。As is known to all是固定用法，意思是“众所周知“。所以knew改成known。

第二处：考查固定用法。keep在此是系动词，用形容词作表语表示状态，所以health改成healthy。

第三处：考查固定用法。as follows是固定用法，意思是“如下“。所以follow改成follows。

第四处：考查宾语从句。这里含有一个宾语从句，引导词在从句中作主语，表示“……的东西或事情”。所以which改成what。

第五处：考查时态。表示一个客观事实，用一般现在时，所以was改成is。

第六处：考查定语从句。这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，所以用which。that改成which。

第七处：考查句子结构。benefit是及物动词，后面要有宾语，所以在benefit后面加上us。

第八处：考查非谓语动词。作句子主语，用动名词。所以Stay改成staying。

第九处：考查固定用法。第二天早晨直接说next morning，前面不需要再加介词，所以去掉in。

第十处：考查固定用法。last but not least是固定用法，意思是“最后但并不是最不重要的”。所以and改成but。