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　　Ding Li的舅舅从奥地利回国，给她带了一些音乐唱片.这是为她即将来临的生日买的.她写了一个简短的信邀请她的朋友Sheila参加她星期日举行的茶话会.要Sheila见信打电话告诉她.请你把这封通过别人转交的便条式的信写出来.

　　词数：80～100.

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写作思路点拨 (1) 人称：第一人称，第二人称，第三人称 (2) 时态：一般现在时，现在完成时，一般将来时 (3) 短语：come to tea参加茶话会；return from从……回国；a lot of许多； music records音乐唱片；be interested in对……感兴趣；tea party茶话会；listen to听：as soon as一……就……；so that以便；be able to能够；look forward to盼望. (4) 要点 1)你是否来我们在星期日举行的茶话会 2)舅舅从奥地利回国，为我的生日带来许多音乐唱片 3)希望你对我们的茶话会感兴趣，一起听精彩的节目 4)你一见信就打电话，以便知道你什么时候到达 (5) 草拟要点成英语 1) to wonder if you to come to tea with us on Sunday． 21 Uncle to have returned from Austria and to have brought me a lot of music records for my coming birthday． 3) to hope you to be interested in our tea party. 4) to call me on seeing the letter, to know the time of your arrival. (6) 扩展要点成句 1) I wonder if you will come to tea with us on Sunday. 2) My uncle has just returned from Austria and he has brought me a lot of music records for my coming birthday. 3) I hope you'll be interested in our tea party. 4) Call me as soon as you have seen the letter, so that I can know when you'll be able to arrive. (7) 合理调整句型，适当增加细节和必要和过度词，谋篇组句成文 Dear Sheila, 　　I wonder if you will come to tea with us on Sunday. My uncle has just returned from Austria and he has brought me a lot of music records for my coming birthday. I know you like music, and I hope you'll be interested in our tea party. We can listen to the beautiful performance together. Please call me as soon as you have seen the letter, so that I can know when you'll be able to arrive. Looking forward to seeing you. Yours, Ding Li (8) 语言运用提示 I wonder if you will come to tea with us on Sunday．一句中宾语从句中的will为情态动词，表示“愿意”，而不是助动词；please call me as soon as you have seen the letter, so that I can know when you'll be able to arrive．一句的主句中，as soon as引导一个时间状语从句，在so that引导的目的状语从句中，又含有一个when引导的宾语从句.在时间状语从句中用一般现在时代替一般将来时，而宾语从句的时态则不能这样用.