Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)画掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday our club held an English speech contest, which theme is “Challenge Myself”. A large number of students attended to the contest and showed their wonderful performances. In the stage, though face great pressure, the speakers bravely overcame it and challenged them to achieve great success. What’s more, they impressed us deep with their unusual confidences and performances.

Through such activity, we know a lot more about our students. But we have gained much, such as self-confidence and honor. Besides, our club was growing stronger.

Answer 1

【答案】1. which → whose

2. 删除attended后的to

3. In → On

4. face → facing

5. them → themselves

6. deep → deeply

7. confidences → confidence

8. such后加an

9. But → And

10. was → is

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍俱乐部举办主题为“挑战自我”的英语演讲比赛的情况，通过这次活动，学生们获得了自信和荣誉。

1.考查定语从句。分析句子可知，此处是非限制性定语从句关系词，先行词English speech contest在从句中充当定语，应用关系代词whose，故将which改为whose。

2.考查及物动词。attend作为“参加/出席”时是及物动词，其后直接加宾语，故删除attended后的to。

3.考查介词。此处考查短语on the stage“在舞台上”，故将In改为On。

4.考查状语从句的省略。分析句子可知，此处考查状语从句的省略，完整的句子是On the stage, though they were facing great pressure, the speakers bravely overcame it and challenged themselves to achieve great success.当主从句主语一致，且从句有be时，可省略从句的主语和be，省略之后的状语从句是though facing great pressure，故将face改为facing。

5.考查代词。结合上下文可知，从意为“演讲者勇敢地克服压力，挑战他们自己，获得巨大的成功”，结合句意可知，此处应用反身代词themselves作为challenge的宾语，主语与宾语指的是同一个人或者事物时用反身代词。故将them改为themselves。

6.考查副词。此处应用deep的副词修饰动词impress，故将deep改为deeply。

7.考查名词的书。confidence“信心”是不可数名词没有复数形式，故将confidences改为confidence。

8.考查冠词。句意：通过这样一个活动，我们更了解我们的学生了。结合句意可知，此处意为“一个活动”，应用不定冠词，又activity是辅音音素开头，故在such后加an。

9.考查并列连词。结合上下文可知，本句和上句是顺承关系，应用and连接，故将 But改为And。

10.考查时态。结合上下文可知，此处讲述现在的事实，应用一般现在时，故将was改为is。