Question

16．很多学校都开设了体育选修课（the selective PE lesson），如游泳、体操（gymnastics），篮球、足球、武术（martial art）、国际标准舞蹈（international ballroom dancing）、乒乓球（table tennis）等．请谈谈你喜欢的体育选修课并说明原因．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文要求考生写你最喜欢的体育选修课以及原因．也就是最喜欢的运动和原因．文中给出了游泳、体操（gymnastics），篮球、足球、武术（martial art）、国际标准舞蹈（international ballroom dancing）、乒乓球（table tennis），以及其他，考生需选择最熟悉最有话可写的一个来写作．注意在写作中应用上高水平的句型以及词汇词组，来增加作文亮点，使作文脱颖而出．
重要短语：
both physically and psychologically，身心上，a good way to，做什么的好办法．
高分句子：
1．So long as we are carefully enough，sports can do us nothing but good．句中So long as 引导让步状语从句，意为只要．
2．That is why I like swimming lesson．本句含有重要句式，That is why…这就是..的原因．

解答 There are many kinds of interesting sports for the selective PE lesson，such as basketball，football，swimming and running，but the most I like is swimming．（点明主题）
     When I was a little child，my father took me to the river which near my house to learn swimming．Then，I found it's really fun and cool when I swim in the water，especially in summer，It's the most exciting thing to do when summer comes．So I like swimming．It's so wonderful．（介绍原因）
     My participation in the selective PE lesson tells me that swimming can make us healthy both physically and psychologically．It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people．So long as we are carefully enough，sports can do us nothing but good．（高分句型）That is why I like swimming lesson．（高分句型）

点评 本篇文章话题较为简单，关于最喜欢的运动考生都有话可写．所以重要的就是写作时为了语言的连贯应该恰当使用连接词和插入语以及注意高级词汇和句式的使用．这才是获得高分的重点．