Question

【题目】青园中学学生会将举办一年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“I Have a Dream”。 假设你是学生会主席王浩，将在演讲比赛开幕式上发言。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。

1.说明比赛的意义，比如提高英语听说能力等；

2.说明比赛的注意事项，比如每个参赛者都应该衣着整洁、举止文雅、演讲不超过5分钟，必须围绕主题等；

3.预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头已写好，不计入总词数。

Boys and girls,

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Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls,

Good morning. Welcome to the annual English speech contest. To improve your English speaking and listening abilities, we hold this English speech contest. It not only offers the chance to practice your English, but also provides a good opportunity to show your graceful self.

Here are some important points each contestant should be aware of. First of all, each contestant should dress and behave properly. Secondly, the speech should be finished within five minutes. Thirdly, all the speeches should be centered on the theme of our contest, “I Have a Dream”. I believe your speeches and performances will inspire more people to achieve their dreams.

In the end, I’d like to wish you all good luck and I hope each contestant will perform their best!

That’s all. Thank you for your attention.

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求青园中学学生会将举办一年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“I Have a Dream”。 假设你是学生会主席王浩，将在演讲比赛开幕式上发言。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。注意发言稿的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1.说明比赛的意义，比如提高英语听说能力等；2.说明比赛的注意事项，比如每个参赛者都应该衣着整洁、举止文雅、演讲不超过5分钟，必须围绕主题等；3.预祝比赛圆满成功。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: First of all首先，In the end最后。还使用了宾语从句I believe your speeches and performances will inspire more people to achieve their dreams.

等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。