分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给美国朋友Tom就暑假里的打算会一封邮件,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般将来时,内容要点包括:未及时回信的原因; 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等).我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为未及时回信的原因.第二部分为假期的打算.
重点短语与句型:
feel sorry for 感到抱歉
in time 及时
To start with首先,
What is more而且,此外
高分句型一:To start with,doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons..此句because原因状语从句中含有not only…but also…句型前部分倒装,后不倒装,
高分句型二:What is more,doing voluntary work,I think,will make a great contribution to the society,which is able to enrich my life.
此句用了which引导非限制性定语从句.
解答 Dear Tom,
How is everything going?I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.You know,I've been preparing for the final exams these days,so I forgot to write back.In your letter,you asked me for my plans on summer vacation.Now,I am writing to tell you some specific details.(未及时回信的原因)
Overall,three things will make my summer vacation meaningful.To start with,doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons.(高分句型一)In addition,it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation,in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends.What is more,doing voluntary work,I think,will make a great contribution to the society,which is able to enrich my life(.高分句型二)I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.By the way,what's your plan to spend your summer vacation?I am looking forward to your reply(.假期的打算)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
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