Question

 最近，你们班英语课上老师组织一次主题为“Does beauty really make much sense?”的讨论。根据下面同学们的讨论结果用英语写一篇120字左右的短文并谈谈自己的观点。

1.学生观点1：一副好面孔就是一张通行证,在社交、求职、竞争中起着重要作用。

2.学生观点2：漂亮不等于胜任工作,只有追求内在完美才是真正的美。

3.你的观点……

参考词汇：通行证：pass     社交: social communication

内在美：spiritual beauty.

Does beauty really make much sense?

Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topic—does beauty really make much sense?                                                            

                                                                   

 

Answer 1

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One possible version:

Does beauty really make much sense?

Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topic—does beauty really make much sense? Some students think that a good face is a pass. Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, social competition, job hunting and so on. Not only can it make you become more confident but also it makes you impressive in the job interview.

Other students hold different opinions. Good appearance doesn’t make any difference. Spiritual beauty is more important. A beautiful person is not necessarily one with good looking, but one with a great talent and kind heart.

As far as I am concerned, both physical beauty and spiritual beauty are very important. What I want to say is that we should never ignore our spiritual beauty training while simply pursuing good appearance.

【解析】

试题分析：要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。注意文章文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如Some students think that a good face is a pass, Not only can it make you become more confident but also it makes you impressive in the job interview.还运用了What I want to say is that…; 主语从句及倒装句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：As far as I am concerned 等等。

考点：提纲作文。