Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你居住的社区准备改建一块空地，现就两个改建方案征求居民意见。方案一：建一个可以停放30辆车的停车场；方案二：建一个篮球场和一个网球场。假设你是方方，给居委会(Residential Committee)写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：

1. 简述你写信的目的及你支持的改建方案：

2. 说明你的理由。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Residential Committee,

I am writing to agree to the first project that a parking lot for 30 cars will be built where it used to be the unused land. My reasons are as follows.

First of all, as is known to all, the number of private cars is on the increase .It will be convenient for us to park our cars after the parking lot is built, reducing more complaints .Besides, the parking lot can avoid disorderly parking, making the traffic smooth in the community to ensure the resident’s safety. Last but not least, the parking lot in the community increases people's happiness, which is of help to the harmony.

I would appreciate it if you could accept my suggestions.

Yours,

Fang Fang

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，你居住的社区准备改建一块空地，现就两个改建方案征求居民意见。方案一：建一个可以停放30辆车的停车场；方案二：建一个篮球场和一个网球场。假设你是方方，给居委会(Residential Committee)写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：

1. 简述你写信的目的及你支持的改建方案：

2. 说明你的理由。

第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，1. 简述你写信的目的及你支持的改建方案。第二段，说明你的理由。第三段，表达期望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: used to do sth , on the increase, increases people's happiness, avoid disorderly parking.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: as 引导的非限制性定语从句和现在分词做状语First of all, as is known to all, the number of private cars is on the increase .It will be convenient for us to park our cars after the parking lot is built, reducing more complaints. which 引导的非限制性定语从句Last but not least, the parking lot in the community increases people's happiness, which is of help to the harmony.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First of all, Besides, Last but not least.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。