假如你是李明.在学校发现许多不文明行为.如随地吐痰.乱涂乱画.乱丢垃圾等.请你给学校文学社写一封信.呼吁同学们提高素质.创建美丽校园．内容要点:1．你所看到的不文明行为及危害,2．为建设美丽校园.提出你的倡议．注意:1．词数100-120,2．开头和结尾已为你写好.不计入总词数．3．不得出现真实姓名．参考词汇:吐痰spit, 刻� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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18．假如你是李明，在学校发现许多不文明行为，如随地吐痰、乱涂乱画、乱丢垃圾等，请你给学校文学社写一封信，呼吁同学们提高素质、创建美丽校园．
内容要点：
1．你所看到的不文明行为及危害；
2．为建设美丽校园，提出你的倡议（至少两点）．
注意：
1．词数100～120；
2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
3．不得出现真实姓名．
参考词汇：吐痰spit；刻画 scratch；不文明行为immoral behaviors
Dear editor，
I am writing to tell you about what I saw while studying in the school．

Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming．

分析假如你是李明，在学校发现许多不文明行为，如随地吐痰、乱涂乱画、乱丢垃圾等，请你给学校文学社写一封信，呼吁同学们提高素质、创建美丽校园．内容要点：1．你所看到的不文明行为及危害；2．为建设美丽中国，提出你的倡议（至少两点）．3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．4．不得出现真实姓名．写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．
【亮点说明】I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places．运用固定句式；Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．运用定语从句；In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．运用定语从句；Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．运用宾语从句；Second，our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment．此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次．
Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．（高分句型二）
Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．（高分句型三）
Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!（高分句型四）

解答 Dear editor，
     I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation．
      I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places．Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．（高分句型一）
       In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．（高分句型二）First，certain laws should be passed to ensure people won't damage the environment．Second，our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment．Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．（高分句型三）
     Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!（高分句型四）
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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