Question

13．假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对很多同学计划在即将到来的暑假做志愿活动这一现象．写一篇演讲稿，号召更多的同学参与其中．
演讲稿的主要内容应包括：
1．志愿活动的意义（对本人、受助对象、社会）；
2．如何做志愿活动（助老助残、公益宣传等）；
注意：
1．词数120一150字左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好．不计人总词数．
Good morning，boys and girls．
In recent years，the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people，especially among youngsters．      ．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇演讲稿，号召更多的同学参与志愿活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：志愿活动的意义（对本人、受助对象、社会）；如何做志愿活动（助老助残、公益宣传等）；我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为志愿活动的意义（对本人、受助对象、社会）．第二部分为如何做志愿活动（助老助残、公益宣传等）．
重点短语与句型：
offer us an excellent chance 提供我们一个好的机会
deal with 处理
learn to be independent学会独立
take part in  参加
It is my great pleasure to meet everyone of you here today 此句用了it作形式主语
And I want to advocate more people to take part in this meaningful activity which will be a very precious lesson for us in the future．
此句which引导的定语从句，修饰先行词this meaningful activity
After all，being a volunteer will offer us an excellent chance to get to know many friends from different places all over the world此句用了动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数．

解答 Hello everyone，it's my great pleasure to meet everyone of you here today．I'd like to talk something about being a volunteer during the summer vacation as I have noticed that many of you are quite interested in such activities and I am very happy to see that．Being a volunteer is beneficial for both us and those who need help．And I want to advocate more people to take part in this meaningful activity which will be a very precious lesson for us in the future．Besides，we will help a lot of people who need our help．志愿活动的意义（对本人、受助对象、社会）．
After all，being a volunteer will offer us an excellent chance to get to know many friends from different places all over the world and we can learn a lot of things during the process of being a volunteer，such as managing our own stuff，learning to be independent as well as dealing with the difficult situations that might happen． 如何做志愿活动（助老助残、公益宣传等）
Thank you!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．