Question

【题目】假定你是李华，校读书俱乐部负责人。俱乐部将在下周三下午三点在报告厅进行英语朗读比赛(recitation contest)。请你给外教Tom写一份电子邮件。内容如下:

1. 邀请他担任比赛评委；

2. 问他届时是否有空出席；

3. 请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品。

注意:

1. 词数80左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Tom,

I’m writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall. If available then, could you do us the favor? And we would appreciate having you as a judge. By the way, It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students. Thanks for considering our request.

I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.本篇以邀请外教Tom1邀请他担任比赛评委并请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品为主题展开论述。通篇应该以一般现在时和将来时时态为主。

2. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，因为是邀请老师出席活动。故应注意讲话语气。一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

3.根据要点，先组此句；句式丰富，避免单词。

4.要点要齐全，但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

【范文亮点】

文章采用了“By the way”等连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

2.文章使用了“invite... to...；look forward to...； do sb the favor；”等句式短语。

3.句式简洁，论据充分。如“I’m writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall.”