Question

【题目】书面表达

Directions: Write an English composition according to the pictures and instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你是一名高一学生，最近你看了一则央视公益广告Family且深有感触。请用英语根据下面的图给你校英语报写一篇立志学习，感恩父母的文章,描述图片要表达的内容和意义并谈谈你的感受。

注意: 不少于120词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I. When I was young, father was the most important person in my family.

Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I. When I was young, father was the most important person in my family. Mother took good care of me and protected me from wind and rain. Later, I grew up. I take on the responsibility to look after my parents. I realize that the family also means “father and mother, I love you.”

The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern. Undoubtedly, our parents have made a lot of sacrifices. It is high time we took measures to show gratitude to them. What’s more, we should not take out parents’ love for granted. Instead, we are supposed to appreciate it from the bottom of our hearts.

From my point of view, we ought to show our affection for out beloved parents. Now it is time for us to do what we can in return for their hard work. What we shall do now is study hard and make progress in our studies. Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：本文对考生的要求较高，要求考生首先读懂原文，再根据文字提示写作。写作的要点都隐含在题中，再读懂文章的基础上，要考生自己归纳出来，再一一进行解决，考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成文，也要注意运用适当的高级句型如定语从句，强调句等让文章不显得那么平淡，而有文采。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语take care of 照顾；grow up 长大；What’s more而且；The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；It is high time we took measures to show gratitude to them这句子运用到it is high time that 该是做某事的时候的这个句型；What we shall do now is study hard and make progress in our studies这个句子运用what引导主语从句；