Question

5．假设你是中学生李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解中国人的吃文化，请用英语给他回信．要点包括：中国菜食材广泛；烹制方法多样；不同地区，菜的味道区别较大；
注意：
1．词数100左右，
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom
I'm glad to introduce chinese dishes for you．
Famous for its abundance and exquisite，Chinese food culture has occupied an important part in the nation's tradition cultures（高分句型一）．China is of long history with a vast territory．Due to the diversity of the climate，products and customs，there are widely different food styles and taste in local regions．Through creation by past dynasties，the long standing cooking art has formed rich and colorful local dishes．Among them，"the eight major dishes"enjoys the upper reputation，which consists of Shangdong，Chekiang，Sichuan，Jiangshu，Guangdong，Hunan，Fujian and Anhwei．
Shandong dishes are divided into two factions as Tsinan and Jiaodong dishes．They are good at clear dishes，pure but not greasy．Sichuan dishes have enjoyed the fame that every dish has its own characteristic and none two share the same taste．They are also famous for pocked，peppery and savor taste．Chengdu and Chongqing dishes are two mail branches．Jiangsu dishes lay stress on the original taste with proper sweetness and salty．They consist of Yangzhou，Suzhou and Nanking branches．Chekiang dishes are both delicious and sweet smelling，both soft and slide，clean and not greasy．They consist of Hangzhou，Ningbo and Shaoxing branches（高分句型二）．What's more，the steamed dishes and vegetable dishes have their own charms．Actually，Chinese dishes have earned world's fame．The Chinese eateries could be found everywhere throughout the world．Many foreigners regard having a Chinese meal as a high honor．
Your sincerely
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Famous for its abundance and exquisite，Chinese food culture has occupied an important part in the nation's tradition cultures．
中国饮食文化以其丰富多彩而著称于世，在中华民族传统文化中占有重要地位．
高分句型二：
Chekiang dishes are both delicious and sweet smelling，both soft and slide，clean and not greasy．They consist of Hangzhou，Ningbo and Shaoxing branches．
浙江菜很好吃，香，软，滑，干净，不油腻．它们包括杭州、宁波和绍兴的分支．

解答 Dear Tom
I'm glad to introduce chinese dishes for you．
Famous for its abundance and exquisite，Chinese food culture has occupied an important part in the nation's tradition cultures（高分句型一）．China is of long history with a vast territory．Due to the diversity of the climate，products and customs，there are widely different food styles and taste in local regions．Through creation by past dynasties，the long standing cooking art has formed rich and colorful local dishes．Among them，"the eight major dishes"enjoys the upper reputation，which consists of Shangdong，Chekiang，Sichuan，Jiangshu，Guangdong，Hunan，Fujian and Anhwei．
Shandong dishes are divided into two factions as Tsinan and Jiaodong dishes．They are good at clear dishes，pure but not greasy．Sichuan dishes have enjoyed the fame that every dish has its own characteristic and none two share the same taste．They are also famous for pocked，peppery and savor taste．Chengdu and Chongqing dishes are two mail branches．Jiangsu dishes lay stress on the original taste with proper sweetness and salty．They consist of Yangzhou，Suzhou and Nanking branches．Chekiang dishes are both delicious and sweet smelling，both soft and slide，clean and not greasy．They consist of Hangzhou，Ningbo and Shaoxing branches（高分句型二）．What's more，the steamed dishes and vegetable dishes have their own charms．Actually，Chinese dishes have earned world's fame．The Chinese eateries could be found everywhere throughout the world．Many foreigners regard having a Chinese meal as a high honor．
                                                                                                                                                                                  Your sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                        Li hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．