Question

近年来中学校园里的早恋现象越来越严重。假如你是李华，打算给当地一家报纸的编辑写一封信，反映这一现象。要点如下：

现状	中学生的早恋现象越来越普遍，家长和老师非常担忧。
危害	早恋严重影响学习和生活；由于中学生身心都不够成熟，早恋容易使他们收到伤害；早恋极难成功。
你的观点	……

注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数：100字左右。 3. 开头已经写好，不计入总次数。

参考词汇：早恋：puppy love   不成熟：immature

Dear Editor,

I am writing to raise public concern over puppy love in high school. _______________Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am writing to raise public concern over puppy love in high school. Nowadays, puppy love is becoming more and more common among middle school students. Parents and teachers both grow more and more anxious about it.

Puppy love can do serious harm to teenagers. Once they fall in love, they can’t concentrate on their lessons any more. No doubt it will affect their normal studies. Because middle school students are mentally and physically immature, it easily hurts both sides deeply. In fact, puppy love often ends in failure.

In my opinion，we should do proper things at proper ages. As students, our main task is learning. It’s hard for us to keep a good balance between learning and love. We should set high goals and spare no efforts to fight for them.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，话题是关于“学生早恋现象”，要点是以表额形式给出，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.但是你的观点要自己组织，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。亮点有：We should set high goals and spare no efforts to fight for them.

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。