Question

6．你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼．请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿．文章需包括：
1．你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍；
2．你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议．
Boys and girs，
We high school students do have some growing pains but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely．First，some of us are upset about their figures and looks．It's unnecessary and it's not impoatant at all．We needn't care about it．It is one's inner beauty that matters．（高分句型）Second，we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers，parents and classmates．Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．（高分句型）Some of us have fewer friends．I think being openminded and friendly will do us good．Third，we work efficiently，full of determination．Last，some of us don't have much pocket money，so they feel unhappy．（说明原因）Isn't it strange？So long as we have some，that's enough．And we can learn to earn money!
That's all．Thank you．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is one's inner beauty that matters．一个人的内在美是最重要的．
高分句型二：
Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．
面对这些，我们能找到一个合适的时机和他们进行心灵的沟通，尽量的消除误会．
句型一 该句是一个强调句，被强调部分为句子的主语．原句为：one's inner beauty matters．
句型二 ①Facing this，此处使用了现在分词作状语，表主动
           ②trying to remove the misunderstanding．此处使用了现在分词作伴随状语

解答 Boys and girs，
    We high school students do have some growing pains but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely．First，some of us are upset about their figures and looks．It's unnecessary and it's not impoatant at all．We needn't care about it．It is one's inner beauty that matters．（高分句型）Second，we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers，parents and classmates．Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．（高分句型）Some of us have fewer friends．I think being openminded and friendly will do us good．Third，we work efficiently，full of determination．Last，some of us don't have  much pocket money，so they feel unhappy．（说明原因）Isn't it strange？So long as we have some，that's enough．And we can learn to earn money!
    That's all．Thank you．

点评 本书面表达是一篇议论文，写作时应注意根据所提观点进行符合逻辑的论述．