Question

【题目】假定你是李华，是北方某城市一所中学的学生。你的美国网友Peter听说你校冬季由于雾霾严重经常放假，非常担心你的学习和健康。请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件：

1. 感谢他的关心；

2. 说明在家学习情况；

3. 政府采取措施减少雾霾。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：雾霾haze

Dear Peter，

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Your,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Thank you for your concern about my health and studies.

This winter, because of heavy haze, we didn’t go to school for about 15 days, which affected our studies to some degree. However, our school did something to make up for that. We learnt lessons on the Internet and did our homework at home. If we had any problems, we would communicate with our classmates and teachers by WeChat or QQ.

To our joy, the local government has taken some measures to prevent haze. The situation has been improving. I’m sure we’ll have a blue sky in the future. Thank you again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，是北方某城市一所中学的学生。你的美国网友Peter听说你校冬季由于雾霾严重经常放假，非常担心你的学习和健康。请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件：1. 感谢他的关心；2. 说明在家学习情况；3. 政府采取措施减少雾霾。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：concern(关心)；because of (因为)；haze (雾霾)；to some degree (在某种程度上)；make up for (弥补)；communicate with (与……沟通)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。