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17.假如你在某英文网站的ask Advice Girl栏目看到一位网友来信,请你回复给出建议.
Dear Advice Girl,

I have just moved from California to Ohio.At my new school,there are so many groups like those I see in movies,but there's no one like the people I used to be with.How can I fit in(融入) or at least make some friends?
Erica
[写作内容]
1.在新学校交朋友有困难,但…;
2.主动和别人交谈和分享;
3.发现兴趣相同的同学,然后…;
4.参加某个社团(association)或…;
5.…
[写作要求]
1.适当发挥,不能逐条翻译;2.词数:约90词;3.书写规范,卷面整洁;
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯.
Dear Erica,
I am sorry to learn that you have problems in your new school. 
                
Love,
The Advice Girl.

分析 本文是要写一封回信.完成本文的写作,可分以下三步走:
一、审题.可从体裁、内容、结构三方面进行审题,同时有必要明确统筹全篇的主要时态.
1、体裁.写作要求是根据来信写一封回信,所以其体裁是书信,在就要求我们首先有熟悉书信的基本格式;
2、内容.回信的特点就是根据来函内容作出必要的答复;
3、结构.一般说来,中学英语写作多采用两段或三段式(再多了就显得繁复杂乱),后者多用于议论文等体裁.另外,整篇文章在逻辑(不是形式)关系上,要始终注意保持时态一致.
二、构思.根据上面的审题,可先大致勾勒出文章中的主要句子,明确需要用到的主要词语和表达.
三、写作.用适当的过渡词和关联词语,将上述主要内容和句子连接起来,便成了一篇比较令人满意的回信和优秀的书面表达
That's because we are all new here and our classmates are not quite familiar with each other.(高分句式一 )
With time going on,I'm sure we'll know you better and like to make friends with you.( 高分句式二)

解答 Dear Erica,
     I am sorry to learn that you have problems in your new school.I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely.That's because we are all new here and our classmates are not quite familiar with each other.(高分句式一 )But I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.(对现在的处境表示同情)
First,you should take an active part in the discussions and freely voice your own opinions.At the same time,learn to listen to others'views.Second,you should learn about our classmates'likes and dislikes.Gradually you can find something in common with us.In this way,you can get to know more about different people around you.(提出解决的办法)
Above all,do remember that participating in associations with others together makes you share something with them.With time going on,I'm sure we'll know you better and like to make friends with you.( 高分句式二)
Best wishes.
Love,
The Advice Girl.

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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