Question

【题目】假定你是李华，是学校学生会主席。最近你校英语俱乐部将开展的主题为“青少年体重超重问题”的讨论会。请你写一篇发言稿。要点如下：

1. 问题出现的原因：爱吃甜食及脂肪含量高的食物，缺乏运动等

2. 从饮食、运动及生活方式等方面提出建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear fellow students,

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Thanks for your attention.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow students,

As we know, there are more and more overweight teenagers. The reasons for this are as follows. First of all, most fat teenagers prefer food with too much fat and sugar to a balanced diet. Secondly, some teenagers go to bed and get up very late, and they don’t have a regular schedule. Which is harmful to their health. What’s more, less exercise can also make children overweight.

In my opinion, overweight children should go on a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruit because they are rich in vitamins. I suggest they eat less sweet food which contain much sugar and fat. In addition, it is advisable to take regular exercise. In short, a healthy mind and lifestyle will make a difference.

Thanks for your attention.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求根据英语俱乐部将开展的主题为“青少年体重超重问题”的讨论会写一篇发言稿。要点包括：1.问题出现的原因：爱吃甜食及脂肪含量高的食物，缺乏运动等2. 从饮食、运动及生活方式等方面提出建议。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句Which is harmful to their health.和which contain much sugar and fat. 宾语从句they eat less sweet food. a balanced diet, regular schedule, make a difference.等词汇及As we know, First of all, Secondly, What’s more, In my opinion, In addition等连接词。